Diana the Huntress by Guillaume Seignac (19th Century)
accountdesativadamaistarde-deac said:
Hi, first of all I would like to make it very clear, that this does not and hate, I love your writing and I will continue paying coffees as long as I can, but I would like to understand the direction of the PLA,I wanted to understand what led you to do the last two chapters and change course.
What made you change the course of history so much? Don't take this the wrong way, but sanzu was having a fantastic construction until I came to the back of the last chapters, besides not having much sense was so many loose ends.
and I did not understand very well the concept of piece, what was the goal?
I really hope you don't get upset, I apologize now, I really want to understand this, and one of my favorite stories, but the last few chapters were a big mess, it was so frustrating.
If it offends you, you don't have to answer me, I'll buy you a cup of coffee later, thank you.
HIII!!!
first off I wanted to say thank you for reading PLA! I have so many wonderful readers and I love everyone that’s reached out for more!!! I wanted to apologize for not updating since September, I needed a break!
I realized that my writing process had become less of “I love writing this! Let’s keep writing!” and more “Everyone want’s me to post! I have to keep writing!” so obviously that sucked out the fun of PLA for me. (this was all in my head mind you, everyone has been incredibly kind and gentle with me!) hopefully i’ll get the energy to get back into it soon and finish the story, but i’m not quite sure yet when that will be (sorry!)
so onto your questions! i’m not quite sure what you mean by the last two chapters being a complete deviation of the story. to me, haru was always going to go back to takemichi and mikey and they would clear the air/start a real relationship with each other. the last two chapters have a lot of fluff and happiness in them which, yes, is super different from the rest of the fic BUT! there are definitely some cracks under the surface/concerns on haru’s end that are keeping him from fully, truly enjoying his new happiness, which are supposed to reach a breaking point later in the fic. so if ur wondering why there are so many loose ends, it’s because the fic isn’t finished!
i would love to hear more on why u think the last couple of chapters are a “big mess” and why they were frustrating to you, and hopefully i can explain myself some more. feel free to send another message! at the end of the day, pla is a story about healing and realizing that happiness is not nearly as unobtainable as one would think. thank you for reading and i hope you continue to enjoy pla as i get back into it!
at least once a day you should read a poem that slices you clean in half. and then you go to the post office or something
oh teehee I’m in a silly goofy mood (I am hanging on by a fucking thread)
